The Last laugh...In response to Shantanil's EYC Contest # 30

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The Last laugh...In response to Shantanil's EYC Contest # 30 Just a small mouse? You laughed I&rs... Expand

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  promilla posted 3 weeks ago

Thanks a million Sweetzzzzzzzzz

Your sweet comments are food to inspiration.

You are the sweetest:))))))

loveee n huggs

promilla



  bhavna14 posted 3 weeks ago

olaaaa alohaaa sweeeeeeeetzz,,

howw have u beeeeen... long long long long timeeeeeeee,,, n finallly m baccccc heheheheheeh... n i c u have lined up posts for me to read heheehehehe... yeahhh shl do one by oneee...  

tisss one is d intellectual typess haaaan,,, butt i luvedd d way u brought out d thoughts of both d owl n mouse... i kindaaa like d mouse though.. who fears it but stl is standin tall,,, askin for a fight of equals... yeahhhh tatzz more like itttttt... missed readin sch fantastic posts of ursss... 

I smiled at this game of destiny
Who attacks without any sound

I returned safe to my small hole
I was the one who had the last laugh

lolllllllzzzzzzzzzzzz... huggggzzzzzzzzzzzz
bhavna



  promilla posted 3 weeks ago

A warm welcome to my blogs Matheikal !:)

My pleasure to see you here.

Your generous comment made my day!

Thank you so much for your wonderful words.

Promilla



  matheikal posted 3 weeks ago

When I read the first stanza (the owl's voice) I was reminded of the great poems of Ted Hughes (poet laureate, England, until he died a few years ago).  He writes passionately about the violence in nature, especially among animals.  But your second stanza is totally different from that.  

An excellent poem.



  promilla posted 3 weeks ago

Thankyou so much WL

Your generous words never fail to generate motivation.

I am really glad that you loved this. :)

Love
promilla



  womanslove posted 4 weeks ago

Wonderful take on the picture ..and I love the way you expressed ..and the style ...the flow..i loved it in Promilla



  promilla posted 4 weeks ago

Dear Subbu ji

I am honored by your wonderful comment.

Thank you so much for this praise and generous words, it is more than a reward for me. I am really so happy to recieve such beautiful comment fron you. your presence is always welcome and makes my day.

Thanks a ton for your heartfelt wishes too. I am overwhelmed.

Regards
promilla



  promilla posted 4 weeks ago

Dear Sampath ji

Thank you so much for your kind words.

Your presence says so much. Thx again.

Regards

promilla



  purefriendship posted 4 weeks ago

WoW!!! our dear Promilla...You landed on the target ...

Awesome way to convey the message in such a narrative style & you have done it with such an ease 
Just Superb!!! Nice realities, good anology, expressible emotions, eventual entertainment to feel the punch lines for the message it left to the readers mind.
Great to see this Contest motivations from our Yashbhai has started doing wonders in bringing our sulekhites opening up their pandora box of skills & talents to share with the other.
A wonderful job well done....My sincere appreciations and best of luck for ever.

Subbu



  DSampath posted 4 weeks ago

dear promilla,

you have conveyed

so much in a small narrative..

sampath





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