Dreams Everywhere
Morning mist disappearing in the lost horizon
Your kiss evoked the timeless sen...
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Dreams Everywhere
Morning mist disappearing in the lost horizon
Your kiss evoked the timeless sense of being
Your touch felt like a distant dream
My body like a flexible rainbow
In your strong hands melting and settling
You traced the face with your pointer finger
I looked at you with all my hope
You smiled a beautiful smile
Which smelt of sandalwood
Felt like my favorite fragrance
This was my ultimate surrender
Far from any sin, beyond any explanation
You were there with me, my only dream
Living you for all my life in that moment
I knew it would not last forever
That was the magic moment of my life
Which I plucked and kept inside
How easy it was to re-live that dream
How tough it is going to be to keep it alive
With my trembling hands and welled eyes
I released my dream in the oblivion of time
I crushed it into bits and pieces
And buried in the depths of my existence
How mad I was
How ignorant
The crushed dreams grew again in thousands
Not a plant or bush they were
Now they are tress with roots so deep
Dreams were build thousand times
Whenever they were lost or crumbled
Dreams which never faded in deep slumber
I started the journey again with dreams so fresh
Now dreams everywhere
Dreams in the closed fists
Dreams on the burning terrace
Dreams under the wet pillows
Dreams in the morning mist
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Hi Julia
A warm welcome to my space.
I am so happy to see you here:)) Thanks.
And thanks again for the wonderful appreciation.
Promilla
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Promilla,
Just wonderful...especially that one line - dreams under the wet pillow - one could have missed the emotion there, its so subtly put. Wonderful!
Julia
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Thanks a ton Bina! :)
Your words mean a lot.
Promilla
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promilla
loved your dreamy interlude
v. evocative n nicely emoted
enjoyed it a lot
lol
bina
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Heyyyyyyy sweetzzz
Nice to see energy back to my space!!!!!
Where were you hibernated? :)))
Thankssss a million for liking this dreamy thing :))
Love you lotsa
promilla
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Thanks a ton Madhvi :))
Promilla
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oyyyyyyeee hoo sweeeeeetzz,,


tatzzz choooo romantic.. sooo flowyyy.. sooo dreamyyy dreamyyyy... dreamzzz r so guddd,,, no... so mch liberty to dreammm wat v feeel like heheheheh...
ur poem ROCKS...
lollllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzz
bhavna
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nice one promilla
some dreams remain and multiply with us
madhvi
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Thanks a ton Spk..:)
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Thank you so much Meera.
Romantic it is...:)) SEASON HI AISA HAI KYA KARE...LOL
Huggs
promilla
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