Sitting on the shore of that river bed
Looking happy and making that cuckoo’s nest
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Sitting on the shore of that river bed
Looking happy and making that cuckoo’s nest
Where she dreamed to put all her fantasies
All her little dreams and her untold wishes
Where she learned to grow from a child to girl
Where she discovered that she is the best
She was determined to find him in all the places
Where she wanted to put her life with him to rest
Dreams of her life to be in someone’s heart
To hold him next to her loving bosom like birds
She lived the soft emotion of being a mother
Her destination was dying in his loving arms
Wish to love him till death makes them apart
Her ears were longing to hear the magical words
Which could lift her to those divine heights
Which could touch her like magical charms
She found him and was ecstatic with joy
He was answer of her prayers and a dream come true
He treated her as a princess and loved her like a possession
He never realized that she was a live human but not a toy
She was too happy to feel what was going on
He was too busy in his unbound aggression
Love was too much in her blinded sight
When he slipped from her arms she did not realize
The world of her dreams was shattered in a moment
When she found him gone from her fantasy land
Love for him was a need of body just a lust
He had betrayed her dream and broken the trust
She was too shocked and too sad with grief
She was burning in the furry of rage
She was too numb to feel or react
When she was out of her blissfully drunken stage
She was committed for life from her side
He was just staying there for a night
He who never knew what love is
She who never stopped feeling it
It was her destiny maybe
But it was his end anyway
She still loves him and wants him back
He still stops for nights but the love? No! He never feels
Hi Shelley
Nice to seeya back!
You are right .......there are people who go thru the pain but is it possible to live without dreams?
I know...answer is NO.
CHEERS!!
Promilla
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hi.....nice read....it reminds me of someone....i know.......dont we all live in our dreamland...and then get hurt...
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Hi Madhu
Thanks for your lovely comment.
My pleasure. Wish you all the best.
Promilla
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Promilla,
A poignant & beautiful piece. Very good one..
Thanks for stopping by.
Madhu
www.indimag.com
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Hi Anjana
yeah I too believe that and it is a universal truth..
Thanks a lot for droppin in...I'm glad.
promilla
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When a woman loves, it is with all her heart... or so I always want to believe! A very touching poem... with a hint of pain...
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Hi Ajit
Thanks a ton for your wonderful words and valuable reco.
Such words from you means a lot to me.
Thanks again.
Promilla
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simply classic.....................promilla...................
I read it again and again........................................................and again
every time it apppeared to be the best bet for the contest
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I know!!!
Thanks a ton....:)))
Your way of complimenting is awesome. I really feel good..
The love without pain doesn't exist. Life without love is real waste.
Thanks again Yashasvi for your beautiful words.
Promilla
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wow
I wish to write about each and every word you wrote... HER destinations die in his arms... yeah ithappens dear
the way he came for the night an dnever loved, while she felt the love around her... so touching and so real feelings.....
Such a great poem divulging teh very hart of a lady in love....
beautifully written
yashasvi --One of Your Fans
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