BAS TUM
Badal se jo nikli ho
Zade ki who dhup ho tum
Pran me mere chupte ho
Pyar ka aisa roop ho tum
Man ko mere behlao
Bin bole aab aa jao
Doori kitni ab priytam
Tan ko thoda choo jao
Prem ki kaisi seema hai yeh
Khud baras baras me jati hu
Chupke se apne khare aasu
Me Amrit se pee jati hu
Tadap meri vyakul karti
Pal jeeti me pal marti
Tum aa jaoge to sonchu
Kuch aur baras me ji pati
Pran mere tum door nahi
Bas dhekh tumhe na pati hu
Saawan ki yeh son jhadi
Aur me jalti reh jati hu.
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Promilla
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beautiful...
reflector
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Dhanyawaad Komal... prashnsha ke liye.
Muje khushi hai ki kavita apko pasand aayi.
Promilla
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promilla - bahut sunder kavit - bahut sunder bhav .............
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Hi Shootradhaar ji,
Apka ati dhanyawaad. Link ke liye bhi, swaagat ke liye bhi aur shubhkamnao ke liye bhi.Aur meri kavita padne ke liye bhi, aur uspar pratikriya ke liye bhi.
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Dhanyawaad Yash ji. Apne samay nikal ke isse pada, accha laga.
Aur isspe pratikriya di ye aur bhi accha laga.
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Hi Promilla
Sulekha ke hindi patal par aap ka bahut-bahut Swaagat hai
.....Aap ne bahut hi sundar kawita se pahla kadam Sulekha par rakha...Aage ke safar ke liye Shubhkamnayain....!
....Koshish kariye hindi font ke saath aage post kariye...Main neeche link de raha hoon hindi font ke liye...!
www.baraha.com
Shootradhaar !
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Ati sunder..dil ko chhu gai aap ki kavita...yash
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Hi Writer at heart

Thanks again.
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FANTSTIC.VERY NICE.KEEP IT UP GOD BLESS YOU
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